BOOK 03 · 1963 — PARALLEL TO BOOK II
The Relentless Moon
Locus nominee · Hugo nominee, 2021
- POV
- Colonel Nicole Wargin — astronaut, governor's wife, former OSS.
- SETTING
- Artemis Base, the Moon. While the Mars expedition flies elsewhere.
- RUNTIME
- ~544 pages. Tor Books, 2020.
- PITCH
- A political thriller in low gravity. The mole hunt nobody asked for and everybody needed.
BRIEFING
It is 1963. The First Mars Expedition is out there somewhere — eighteen months of transit time, twenty-minute radio lag, Elma York's voice coming in from the Niña at light speed. Back on Earth, Earth First is not just demonstrating anymore. They are bombing substations. Poisoning launch-fuel supplies. Working their way up the violence ladder with ideological patience and operational competence, and the IAC's public affairs apparatus is fighting the war with press releases.
Nicole Wargin does not do press releases. What Nicole does: she smiles for photographs in a flight suit and speaks at gala dinners in Kansas and shakes hands for her husband Kenneth's Senate campaign, and none of that is who she actually is. Who she actually is: a former OSS operative, a working astronaut with Artemis Base rotations on her record, and a woman carrying an eating disorder through an environment that quantifies every calorie by necessity. ADHD was not yet a clinical category in 1963. Nicole's attention does not know this. She is sent up to Artemis Base on a routine rotation. The rotation becomes anything but routine approximately forty hours after she lands.
ACT I — LEAKS AND LIES
The oxygen leak is the first anomaly. A fitting on the secondary supply line in Module 7, worn past its replacement interval — except the replacement log shows it was swapped six weeks ago, and the fitter who signed the log is standing right there insisting she swapped it. Bureaucratic error, probably. Artemis Base runs on paperwork the same way it runs on oxygen: imperfectly, by the skin of its redundancies.
The second anomaly is a polio case. In 1963 on the Moon, a polio case is not an anomaly — it is a catastrophe waiting to assemble itself. The base's medical officer quarantines the affected hab module. Nicole sits on the other side of a sealed door and calculates: eighteen people sharing a closed air loop, a virus that requires nothing more than shared breath, and the nearest hospital forty hours away. She is already counting the calories in the ration pack she will not finish. Twenty-three grams of protein, one hundred and forty-seven calories; she puts down the fork after the protein and leaves the rest. The math of being photographed in a flight suit is its own kind of closed system.
The book does not soften this beat. Nicole is functional — gritted-teeth, dangerous-in-a-crisis functional — and she is also counting, always, and the counting is not serving her, and she knows it, and she counts anyway. It is a present-tense cognitive load carried through a thriller plot without sentimentality. She is not fixed by the end. She is managing.
Before the second week is out, IAC counterintelligence pulls her into a secure briefing. The leaks, the polio case — the pattern doesn't read as bad luck or equipment fatigue. There is a mole somewhere in the Artemis Base crew, and Nicole is the only astronaut on station with an OSS file. The briefing gives her six names and a directive: find the mole before the mole files a report about a death.
She asks the right questions. She writes nothing down. She goes back to her actual job — logistics runs, EVAs in the south crater array, the social-political grease a governor's wife provides to a base full of people who might want a favour from Kansas — and she watches six names the way her OSS trainers taught her to watch: without appearing to look. The polio case becomes two cases. A guidance unit on the launch platform reads clean during inspection and fails during a simulated count. Someone on this base is inside enough to touch the oxygen lines and technically literate enough to fake a calibration log. Six names become four.
ACT II — THE HUNT
Four suspects, each of them a person Nicole has eaten with, suited up next to, trusted with her EVA tether. This is the texture of a mole hunt in a closed environment: you are not looking for a stranger. You are looking for someone you would have vouched for yesterday. The reader is given access to Nicole's investigative reasoning — the OSS pattern-matching, the behavioural tells she's cataloguing — and then given access to the same suspects as human beings, fully rendered, with children and correspondence and reasons to be homesick. It is a structural trap, and it is deliberate.
Kenneth's Senate campaign arrives by radio in fragments. A poll number. A fundraiser result. A quote in the Kansas City Star that he calls to clarify three days later. The lag between Kansas and the Moon is short — a few seconds — but politics moves faster than any radio, and by the time Nicole hears his version of a story, it is already in its third news cycle. She performs the wife on the radio calls because performing the wife is one of the things she does at the professional level, and because Kenneth is not performing — he is genuinely worried, genuinely proud, and genuinely incapable of separating either emotion from the Senate race. Both things are true. This is what a real marriage sounds like from six days of transit away.
An astronaut dies in his bunk. The initial report says cardiac arrhythmia. He was healthy; his cardiology screen three months ago was clean. Nicole is in the medical bay before the report is filed, OSS face on: composed, asking the right sympathetic questions, clock-reading the flight surgeon. The arrhythmia is real — it shows in the trace — but it arrived with an abruptness the base pharmacopeia does not account for. She cross-references his duty log against the guidance unit anomaly. She writes nothing down. Four names become three, and she finishes none of her dinner. The nausea and the counting and the investigation are all running on the same track and she manages by not stopping.
Elma York calls on the ship-to-base channel — the Niña and Artemis Base have a shared window twice weekly. Elma's voice arrives slightly compressed, pitched a little high the way it always is when she's anxious, asking about supply manifest discrepancies she noticed in the last data packet. Nicole tells her the manifests are fine. The manifests are not fine. The book does not underline this. It does not need to.
A hab depressurisation — Module 4, three crew sleeping. The pressure alarm fires and the auto-seal closes before anyone goes into vacuum, but the inner door seal shows stress fractures that don't match the maintenance timeline. The mole is escalating. The Mars departure window is less than four months out; after that, the next launch opportunity is twenty-six months away. The IAC program cannot survive a confirmed sabotage death. The mole does not need to succeed spectacularly. They only need to succeed once.
Three names. The book threads cozy procedural, hard-SF survival, and political drama simultaneously and does not break under the load. It gets sharper instead — a hyperfocus passage, edge-lit, uncomfortable to inhabit: Nicole running the same three names against the same event timeline until the list reorganises itself at 3 a.m. and she is back at the beginning, certain about one person and unable to prove it. She is not comfortable. She is extraordinarily good at her job.
ACT III — DECOMPRESSION
The lunar launch tower. The resupply window for the Mars expedition is fourteen hours out. Nicole has seventy-two hours of sleeplessness and rationed nutrition behind her and an investigative process that has gone from three names to two to one. She knows who it is. She cannot prove it to a tribunal. She has forty-five minutes of EVA oxygen and a maintenance airlock access code and a decision to make.
The mole is someone the reader has been gently led to like. Not a telegraphed villain — someone who accumulated sympathy across hundreds of pages of honest characterisation, with genuine ideological conviction and a genuine grievance against an IAC that has, in fact, caused harm. The reveal does not make the sabotage right. It makes it legible. The book insists on the difference.
The confrontation is in vacuum. Suit-to-suit radio, voices slightly compressed, both of them in the long shadow of the launch tower with the Earth in its familiar blue overhead. Nicole has enough oxygen to reach the mole. She does not have enough to reach them and have the conversation and get them both back to the airlock. She does the math in the three seconds it takes to close the distance.
She disables, not kills. The drag back is four hundred metres in one-sixth gravity, which should be easy and is not. She cycles the airlock with forty-three seconds of breathable air to spare. She does not feel triumphant. She feels like she needs to sit down.
The aftermath is the book's most honest section. The IAC's decision to handle the threat internally — to run Nicole as a solo asset rather than brief the base commander — created the conditions for three of the five incidents and probably for the astronaut's death. The investigation clears Nicole. It does not clear the IAC. The institution carries that weight without a redemption speech. Institutions make expedient choices; people die in the gaps; the institution continues. This is not a comfortable conclusion. It is the true one.
Kenneth wins his Senate race. He calls her before his victory speech, which tells her something real. She decides she is done, for now, with the Moon. Helen Carmouche — who came up through the first recruitment cohort, who runs Artemis Base in everything but title — shakes Nicole's hand at the airlock and says something quiet that the reader does not hear. Nicole smiles. The smile, for once, is real.
She goes home to Earth. Not because the IAC orders it, not because she is grounded. Because she chooses to. She packs her gear, puts in for a rotation transfer, and descends. The book ends before she lands — at the moment of choosing: hatch sealed, Earth in the window, the Moon below her getting smaller. She is going down. She is choosing down, and the prose honours it without flinching.
The Relentless Moon runs parallel to Book II in calendar time, and the effect on a reader who has done both is vertiginous: radio anomalies, supply manifest slips, an entire Earth-side political timeline — all of it retold from another angle, in another register, by a woman who is nothing like Elma York except equally real. The Lady Astronaut universe turns out to be bigger than its first POV character, and the series is not the same after you have seen it through Nicole's eyes.